1. Are the initial ideas and development clear?
It was very clear in every aspect.
2. Was the research completed and was it clearly linked to the advert?
It wasn't linked but she did the research and she talked about it in the presentation.
3. Was the process shown with commentary about tools?
Yes. The process shown all about tools and everything she used in creating process.
4. Was the final outcome clear? Could there be any improvements?
For me it was very clear and understandable. Ciani said that she could improve her drawing she used in this advert and I agree with that.
5. Remember to be constructively critical so that you buddy can make useful improvements
I think the advert was good. It should reach the right audience.
Minji's advert
1. Are the initial ideas and development clear?
It wasn't very clear but I really like the idea of this advert.
2. Was the research completed and was it clearly linked to the advert?
I'm not quite sure about the research but maybe she mentioned it and I missed it.
3. Was the process shown with commentary about tools?
I think just a little was said about the development process and the tools that were used.
4. Was the final outcome clear? Could there be any improvements?
The final result was clear but mostly because the teacher pulled out some information and we knew what the advert was about.
Next time, try to be more specific about the materials used.
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